^^ happeh... I'm quite pleased with this piece. There are still some mistakes that are a bit annoying, but nothing to major. The head would have been better tilted the other way and a few things with the feet, but no big deal. The main practice with this one, was for anatomy and shading. The flow of the body worked out pretty well,but if anyone has any tips for the rest i'm all ears.
I used 1.0mm and 1.6mm ball point pens and a few touches of white gel pen to color it.
What I like about it I soon as I seen this picture this first thing that court my attention was it's face simpley because it's full of detail form it's tusk and whiskers to it's horns. To me it seems like wart hog but yet at the same time it has an eastern feel to it. Next body it's a little hard to tell if it's body is all muscle or if it's all scales but of closer inspetion it's both! Very nicely done the muscle and scales complement each other nicely especially because of the colours you picked too.
What I don't like/what could be inproved Right now the only real thing that I was to keen on was it's feet mainly the front paws. Because to me it seems to be a running pose I believe that it's toes should be more stretched out instead of them being bunched up. It's back paws a fine but the back right paws looks a little bit smaller than the left. And lastly it's shadow seems a little bit to light at different parts too.
In conclution this is a very nice of art for you with minor errors.
I soon as I seen this picture this first thing that court my attention was it's face simpley because it's full of detail form it's tusk and whiskers to it's horns. To me it seems like wart hog but yet at the same time it has an eastern feel to it. Next body it's a little hard to tell if it's body is all muscle or if it's all scales but of closer inspetion it's both! Very nicely done the muscle and scales complement each other nicely especially because of the colours you picked too.
Right now the only real thing that I was to keen on was it's feet mainly the front paws. Because to me it seems to be a running pose I believe that it's toes should be more stretched out instead of them being bunched up. It's back paws a fine but the back right paws looks a little bit smaller than the left. And lastly it's shadow seems a little bit to light at different parts too.
In conclution this is a very nice of art for you with minor errors.
- ~TheCookieNommer
Note: I don't give 5 stars for the fact I believe there is alway room for improvement.
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