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July 4, 2012
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Fu Long by ZeitgeistDragon Fu Long by ZeitgeistDragon
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^^ happeh... I'm quite pleased with this piece. There are still some mistakes that are a bit annoying, but nothing to major. The head would have been better tilted the other way and a few things with the feet, but no big deal. The main practice with this one, was for anatomy and shading. The flow of the body worked out pretty well,but if anyone has any tips for the rest i'm all ears.

I used 1.0mm and 1.6mm ball point pens and a few touches of white gel pen to color it.
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Ok let give this a try :)

:bulletblue:What I like about it:bulletblue:
I soon as I seen this picture this first thing that court my attention was it's face simpley because it's full of detail form it's tusk and whiskers to it's horns. To me it seems like wart hog but yet at the same time it has an eastern feel to it. Next body it's a little hard to tell if it's body is all muscle or if it's all scales but of closer inspetion it's both! Very nicely done the muscle and scales complement each other nicely especially because of the colours you picked too.

:bulletred:What I don't like/what could be inproved:bulletred:
Right now the only real thing that I was to keen on was it's feet mainly the front paws. Because to me it seems to be a running pose I believe that it's toes should be more stretched out instead of them being bunched up. It's back paws a fine but the back right paws looks a little bit smaller than the left. And lastly it's shadow seems a little bit to light at different parts too.

In conclution this is a very nice of art for you with minor errors.

- ~TheCookieNommer

Note: I don't give 5 stars for the fact I believe there is alway room for improvement. :heart:
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MuttInkDreams Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student General Artist
wow, very nicely shaded. !
ZeitgeistDragon Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thank you!:)
MuttInkDreams Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student General Artist
you're welcome!
kamarisama Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Amazing design!
ZeitgeistDragon Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012   Traditional Artist
13ghostEz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist
that looks like something that would be off avatar the last airbender
Andy-B123 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice and unique too. Good job!
creatorofmatate Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
looks very nice...i would citrique this one but im too lazy today XD
ZeitgeistDragon Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
Thank you!:)
RandomDragon0412 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thatsa long Fu....
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